Score: 7

"mowwwww......"

submission: let the cat out

date: December 2, 2009

This was just pure comedy man. The animation could still use work and i would have liked a little more than just 1-1/2 mins worth of flash, but besides that story and comedic times was on point. good job man, and keep improving.

Peace,
Kokujin72

Score: 10

"ITS ABOUT DAMN TIME!!!!!....but still......."

submission: Super Mario bros Z ep.8

date: October 9, 2009

************WARNING TO READERS, THIS HAS SOME SPOILERS***************************

This episode was very much so worth the wait. What i really love about your series is that u always keep the battles in each episode fresh and entertaining (one thing most sprite artists dont seem to have quite mastered yet) and they never really seem like your doing the same thing over and over. This is really evident in the aerial battle with mario's party going against bowsers doomship (the sonic and mario skydive scene was fucking awesome lol) and when marios group fought bowsers koopa guards. What i also love is how u change up the different powers the characters use in each episode (e.i. fire sonic, hammer mario, raccoon mario and luigi, stone luigi, etc.) This was also a great episode story wise, with the many twist and turns that took place and with the dialogue of story. I also think your storytelling has a great mix of various emotions, such as humor (do a barrel roll lol), sadness, anger, etc. Also love your experimentation with having drawings of characters in the close up shots instead of just having pixelated forms of them. The only problems that i had were that there were some dialogue typos (which were very few, i know youll fix it) and also where u ended that episode. MAN I KNOW YOUR TRYING TO BUILD SUSPENSE BUT DAM MAN, I REALLY WANTED MOREEEEEEEEEEE LOL. but these were very small issues that didnt stop me from thoroughly enjoying this. U are fucking excellent, my good sir. I tip my hat to you. Please, pleaseeeeeeee keep it up. I know that you probably have lots of things on your plate in life, but try to get us the next episode sometime soon, the ending of this really left me hanging. But also dont let ppl rush your genius either (kinda like how i did just now lol) Put out episodes when YOU feel their up to standards and are ready. Well am rambling now, so anyways, excellent job and good luck in the future.

A very big fan,
kokujin72

P.S. How long do u think your gonna make this arc? It looks like to me, your shooting for 1 or 2 more episodes b4 u go back to the main storyline of the emeralds.

Score: 7

"Good job"

submission: Fandito vs Hiperboy

date: August 19, 2009

I found this movie to be really entertaining. Docked you points b/c the animation needs work and they were no sound effects to go with the actions the characters did, but besides that, this was really fun to watch. The music was great and the action was entertaining. Also i see that your obviously a BIG fan of One Piece. When i saw Fandito do Luffy's arm pose and Gattling gun punch move, sanji's hand-stand spinning kick, and Usopp's slingshot, i was like "tightttt LOL" (u should have had him bust out 3 katanas and use Zolo's style). Anyways, great job, and keep improving.

Score: 9

"Awesome flash, but shadic...."

submission: Sonic:Nazo Unleashed Pt 3

date: August 12, 2009

Am sry but that name just makes me laugh lol. I think Sondow would have been been better. Anyways, great animation, well drawn backgrounds and characters, great story (loved all three), and awesome sounds to go with animation. Nothing really wrong i can point out (well.....there were soooo many DBZ rip-offs, but thats not a big deal and that didnt stop me from enjoying this). Anyways, great job and good luck with your future projects.

Score: 8

"Dude, you guys got something here....."

submission: Mike and Zig in a Anime 1

date: August 12, 2009

Good job, guys. This flash has a really interesting precise, and it's also great because it actually has a story to it and it isnt just a random sprite fight. (there r way too many of those on this site). And the two main character look pretty badass. The sprite animation is pretty fluid, though it seems just a little bit laggy (that didnt stop me from enjoying this though) and the sounds go well with the actions (guess its pretty safe to say that u guys definitely know your way around sprite stuff). For the future, i would suggest making the text look more profession, like putting them in text boxes, giving each character their own pic and text color in text box (maybe even their own unique textbox), allowing the viewer to advance text with a button, maybe give the text a certain sound when viewer advances the text, and if you change your mind on Voice acting, then give each character a certain sound when they first appear in the scene and a certain sound to show their emotions. To tell you the truth, i really dont think u need Voice acting, but if u think u can pull it off....PLEASE, PLEASEEE have a quality mic and people with interesting voices (those things can really kill a flash if done half-assed). Also this should be a no brainer, but give this flash a kickass intro. To respond to your question in your comments, i suggest making this flash episodic and having each episode set in a different anime. One thing i want to add is when u make this flash, make sure that u.....A.) dont just make the format of the whole flash: they go somewhere, they beat up minions, they fight boss, and they win. Try to mix things up a bit, B.) try to give the main characters a challenge when they fight bosses (in this one, they kicked picollo's ass wayyyy to easily), C.) on top of giving them challenges, every now and then, put them in situations where it seems like they can't win and/or are about to lose and/or get killed. It makes things way more entertaining, and D.) Try to give your main characters some flaws, characters that are perfect get boring after awhile. (it also makes them more believe-able and deep).
Am sry that this is hella long, but i really see potential in this being really tight. If u guys want inspiration on making good sprite flashes, then check out, "Super Mario bros. Z", and the "TTA" series. They're fucking awesome. Anyways, good luck guys, and cant wait to see the first official episode. Thx for reading all my review and i hope u find my review helpful and non-douche-bag-ish lol. peace out

P.S. i would like to see another preview

Score: 9

"Kool Flash, but like me get this straight...."

submission: Maybe It's a Virus

date: August 6, 2009

So this its a song about Aids, right? LOL jk. anyways good video, the audio was good and the singer was great. And the animation was unique, clean, and fluid. Totally didnt expect you to take this route with the animation for the lyrics. Cant really so any bad about it. Some people meant not dig the song, but i do. Good job, keep up the good work my friend. Peace.

Score: 10

"(Clap,Clap,Clap)"

submission: ~Midnight Blossom~

date: August 2, 2009

Dude this was very well done flash. The song blends perfectly with the scenes in my opinion. And the animation and was really fluid and the characters and backgrounds were well drawn. It would have been nice to know how the woman in the dead in the first place, but that didnt stop me from enjoying it (am just being nit picky). Besides that, i cant see anything else thats wrong with the flash. Its been a long time since a flash actually made me close to being teary eyed. You shouldnt have been nervous to submit this. This is a beautiful work of art, and newgrounds need more people like you. Keeping doing what you do and good luck with your future works. Peace.

Score: 9

"OMG"

submission: Dimlight

date: July 14, 2009

this was soo funny, and i fucking hate twilight. this should have been made when twilight came out. And the ending made it sooooo worth it.

Score: 7

"not bad"

submission: Combo Execution

date: July 8, 2009

Nice stick fight, the animation was fluid and the sound effects were timed perfectly and fitted well with the actions. Also liked the added touch of the scarf on the main character, really makes him unique and fun to watch. Only complaint was that the enemies pretty much didnt do anything, they just stood there and took the beating. Not saying i wanted the main character to lose or get his ass handed to him, but at least make the enemies resist a little bit and give him a challenge. And there are soooo many other stick fights on NG that its hard to get excited for one if it doesnt do anything really mind blowing. But overall it was definitely an above average stick fight. Keep improving and hopefully you'll find my review to be constructive. Thank you for reading my review, and good luck with your future projects. peace.

Score: 5

"interesting but glitched"

submission: Laserworx

date: July 1, 2009

like the game, but when i complete a lvl, it doesnt go on to the next lvl. fix it.