Score: 7

"mowwwww......"

submission: let the cat out

date: December 2, 2009

This was just pure comedy man. The animation could still use work and i would have liked a little more than just 1-1/2 mins worth of flash, but besides that story and comedic times was on point. good job man, and keep improving.

Peace,
Kokujin72

Score: 10

"ITS ABOUT DAMN TIME!!!!!....but still......."

submission: Super Mario bros Z ep.8

date: October 9, 2009

************WARNING TO READERS, THIS HAS SOME SPOILERS***************************

This episode was very much so worth the wait. What i really love about your series is that u always keep the battles in each episode fresh and entertaining (one thing most sprite artists dont seem to have quite mastered yet) and they never really seem like your doing the same thing over and over. This is really evident in the aerial battle with mario's party going against bowsers doomship (the sonic and mario skydive scene was fucking awesome lol) and when marios group fought bowsers koopa guards. What i also love is how u change up the different powers the characters use in each episode (e.i. fire sonic, hammer mario, raccoon mario and luigi, stone luigi, etc.) This was also a great episode story wise, with the many twist and turns that took place and with the dialogue of story. I also think your storytelling has a great mix of various emotions, such as humor (do a barrel roll lol), sadness, anger, etc. Also love your experimentation with having drawings of characters in the close up shots instead of just having pixelated forms of them. The only problems that i had were that there were some dialogue typos (which were very few, i know youll fix it) and also where u ended that episode. MAN I KNOW YOUR TRYING TO BUILD SUSPENSE BUT DAM MAN, I REALLY WANTED MOREEEEEEEEEEE LOL. but these were very small issues that didnt stop me from thoroughly enjoying this. U are fucking excellent, my good sir. I tip my hat to you. Please, pleaseeeeeeee keep it up. I know that you probably have lots of things on your plate in life, but try to get us the next episode sometime soon, the ending of this really left me hanging. But also dont let ppl rush your genius either (kinda like how i did just now lol) Put out episodes when YOU feel their up to standards and are ready. Well am rambling now, so anyways, excellent job and good luck in the future.

A very big fan,
kokujin72

P.S. How long do u think your gonna make this arc? It looks like to me, your shooting for 1 or 2 more episodes b4 u go back to the main storyline of the emeralds.

Score: 7

"Good job"

submission: Fandito vs Hiperboy

date: August 19, 2009

I found this movie to be really entertaining. Docked you points b/c the animation needs work and they were no sound effects to go with the actions the characters did, but besides that, this was really fun to watch. The music was great and the action was entertaining. Also i see that your obviously a BIG fan of One Piece. When i saw Fandito do Luffy's arm pose and Gattling gun punch move, sanji's hand-stand spinning kick, and Usopp's slingshot, i was like "tightttt LOL" (u should have had him bust out 3 katanas and use Zolo's style). Anyways, great job, and keep improving.

Score: 10

"ill, nuff said"

submission: X-men

date: August 9, 2009

Dude this is a fire ass beat man. Love x-men and the theme, and u just single-handedly took it to the next lvl. You have a really good ear when it came to remixing the different sounds and riffs from the theme. If i could flow, i'd rap over this, but i cant lol. But anyways, props to ya kidd. Keep doing you, man. Peace.